Narmog

[devilslayer]

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Name: Narmog
Class: 2nd
Atmosphere: Breathable
Climate: blistering hot
Terrain: rocky
Native species: Exitius's Army
Affiliation: Exitius
Government: The Dread Horde

Places of interest:

• The Hollow
  
• The Demon Hall
  
• The Temple of Exitius
  
• Cerberus Valley
  
• Shadow Dragon Mountain
  
• Main weapon storage
  
• Main supply post
  
• Hall of Exitius
  
• Grim Keepers Cavern
  
• Tower of Sacrifice
  
• Holding Cells/jail/prison.
  
• Torture chamber.
  
• Docking bay.
  

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Narmog is a huge out post for Exitius as well as a stronghold for his forces. The hollow acts as their (any of exitius' forces who feel like living in there) main nest in Narmog although the forces are spread out all over the planet (which is entirely dead no water no plants its just a rock floating through space with the atmosphere and orbital rotation of a planet). although there are no plants, the planet has oxygen coming from vents all over the planet which also spew out heat. the tower of sacrifice was painted (and tainted) with blood.
although the planet has no life or water(other than the "men" in exitius' army) it is an amazing mining planet unfortunately the demons live in mine shafts and use them as homes they created the hollow from one such mine shaft. the temple of Exitius and the hall of Exitius are obviously both places of worship to the god. The planet dosent really have much for cities its mainly wasteland and places where the creatures stay the dont really have much for buildings although the do have some nut most are places of worship.

[Quantum Rain]

I'm usually never too nit picky on structure for character bios, but I am especially nit picky on planet structures. Please use the structure provided in the stickies to where it looks at least like this: Example 1 or this: Example 2 While this third one being the preferred: Example 3


This ensures no misunderstandings, ease of reading, as well as easy searching, because most forum search engines are bad enough as is...

[devilslayer]

Sorry, it sucks I didn't have time to finish it in class.

[Quantum Rain]

It's alright, I just wanted to clarify that though. Structure this time is actually important.

[devilslayer]

ya it will be first class and agent aaa said i could not make it the demon home world because you like to do that so, can it be the demon home world?



p.s. is my grammar getting better?

[devilslayer]

i think its done

[Quantum Rain]

Yes, it is improving.

Btw, you do not have to have the native species filled with Exitius's army, you can keep that to none, seeing as who lives there is provided in the description. (And the native species all already have a homeworld.)

The demon homeworld is a special case if you look at it, so that much I'll have to decline that it can't be the primary for them, but an important outpost, sure. (Keep it 2nd class too, even that's not important enough for 1st class.)

[devilslayer]

ok, thanks for the help quantum rain ill keep that in mind with this which btw is done.

Hey quantum is this accepted.

[Quantum Rain]

Now that I've edited it, please ensure to use the coding and general layout I have placed into your planet in future cases.

For now, approved.

[devilslayer]

thanks Q man.

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